The Three Little Pigs The wolf’s side of the story
I am trying to make a robot suit with wings to help me fly to treasure island, but I have lost my wrench. So I went to my neighbor Kyle’s house the first little pig’s house, but he got scared so he throw a knife at me. Luckily it missed then three more came so I ran, and ran but when I turned around, all I could see was a big pile of ash with a little burnt pig on top of the pile. I was so sad but I still needed a wrench for my invention so I went to my friend. Dave’s house the second little pig’s house to ask if he knew anyone who might have,a wrench that I could boro for an hour or two.He told me about his brother Mark who lived on Cherry Lane.He showed me where he lived I knocked on the door, He opened the door then he slammed it in my face so Dave knocked on the door. BBAANNGG! Dave fall to the ground He was bleeding out all over the ground ,mark came out with a high powered shotgun so I ran and ran, Mark gould 911. I heard police sirens getting louder and louder then, I heard “We have you stranded Put your hands where we can see them” So, that is my sid off the story. And I still did not get to fly to tresherilind.
I like the way you do your story and the way you highlight it,next time you should highlight the noun to one colour a verb and a adverb.
ReplyDeletehi think your story was creative I like the details you put in but you mite want to fix up the spelling next time but it was an amazing story from Levi @ paroa school
ReplyDeleteSteffan I like how you made it purple. You could make the font little so it’s easy to see how long did it take to do that work?
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