Friday 19 August 2016

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What Happened

Topic Sentence
One day when I was in the olympics
I was pedaling around a corner
Top  attributes
I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson
I hired hons and people cheering
Middle attributes
I am getting closer and closer to the finish line,
I see my coach and family cheering me on
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When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up
I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.

One day when I was in the olympics I was pedaling around a corner I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson I hired hons and people cheering I am getting closer and closer to the finish line, I see my coach and family cheering me on When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.