I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Monday 12 December 2016
Tuesday 29 November 2016
Monday 21 November 2016
Thursday 25 August 2016
Wednesday 24 August 2016
Monday 22 August 2016
Friday 19 August 2016
Descriptive writing
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What Happened
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Topic Sentence
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One day when I was in the olympics
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I was pedaling around a corner
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Top attributes
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I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson
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I hired hons and people cheering
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Middle attributes
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I am getting closer and closer to the finish line,
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I see my coach and family cheering me on
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Botim attributes
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When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up
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I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.
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One day when I was in the olympics I was pedaling around a corner I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson I hired hons and people cheering I am getting closer and closer to the finish line, I see my coach and family cheering me on When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.
Tuesday 16 August 2016
Thursday 11 August 2016
Thursday 30 June 2016
Monday 27 June 2016
Thursday 26 May 2016
w3reding
My thoughts
Dear mum and dad we have mand to giliperly we where andosid but we survived 20 ingrid and 30 ded now I am sitting in a trench with 4 aher men waiting for the next assault I am in the front lines of defense I am a scout I sit in a small trench waiting to see what they are sending out to attack us with we are eating sandwiches ,fruit and vegetables.
Wednesday 25 May 2016
Persuasive writing
In my opinion think that we should be a allowed to listen, to music because it would bring some fun to the class, and some students don't like to come to school because, it is boring.
If we add fun to the class, then we might cure mondayitis. That is why I think that we, should be allowed to listen to music.
Thursday 12 May 2016
Character’s
Scarlet : anorexic.
Scarlett's Mum : Did not want to help scarlet.
Dr Brantly : Diatishon.
Friday 6 May 2016
The three little pigs - The wolf's side of the story!
The Three Little Pigs The wolf’s side of the story
I am trying to make a robot suit with wings to help me fly to treasure island, but I have lost my wrench. So I went to my neighbor Kyle’s house the first little pig’s house, but he got scared so he throw a knife at me. Luckily it missed then three more came so I ran, and ran but when I turned around, all I could see was a big pile of ash with a little burnt pig on top of the pile. I was so sad but I still needed a wrench for my invention so I went to my friend. Dave’s house the second little pig’s house to ask if he knew anyone who might have,a wrench that I could boro for an hour or two.He told me about his brother Mark who lived on Cherry Lane.He showed me where he lived I knocked on the door, He opened the door then he slammed it in my face so Dave knocked on the door. BBAANNGG! Dave fall to the ground He was bleeding out all over the ground ,mark came out with a high powered shotgun so I ran and ran, Mark gould 911. I heard police sirens getting louder and louder then, I heard “We have you stranded Put your hands where we can see them” So, that is my sid off the story. And I still did not get to fly to tresherilind.
Wednesday 4 May 2016
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