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What Happened
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Topic Sentence
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One day when I was in the olympics
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I was pedaling around a corner
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Top attributes
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I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson
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I hired hons and people cheering
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Middle attributes
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I am getting closer and closer to the finish line,
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I see my coach and family cheering me on
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Botim attributes
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When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up
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I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.
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One day when I was in the olympics I was pedaling around a corner I was in 4th place, when I went past one pierson I hired hons and people cheering I am getting closer and closer to the finish line, I see my coach and family cheering me on When I sore my family and coach I started to, spend up I went past two more people I Was in first place and I wun.
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