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As the wind like ice blew over the man's head, big firey creatures scuttled across the hard ground. As a shadow brushed over him he jolted back into the cold hard wall.As he drifts off to sleep the howl of a wolf sent chills up his spine. As the sound of wolves grew louder and louder the man sank more and more into depression and loneliness.
As the night turns into day the man awoke from his deep slumber, big creatures banged against the outside of the cabin. As the banging stopped the man bled more and more, and the man grew weaker and weaker. As the man began to slump across the floor he fell asleep. As the man slept, big fiery creatures banged on the outside of the cabin and he awoke once again. As the man’s thoughts faded in and out he collapsed and fell into a slumber that he will not awaken from.
Hi Steffan, it's Nika from Room 8. This is terrific because you used lots of juicy words in your story. Maybe next time you could add an introduction of how he became so weak. Did you get to choose your picture?
ReplyDeletethanks im glad u liked it and no i did not get to chose the pitcher.I was going to put an introduction but we had A sir-ton amount of time to do it in so I could not do it in time so sorry for that
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