My thoughts
Dear mum and dad we have mand to giliperly we where andosid but we survived 20 ingrid and 30 ded now I am sitting in a trench with 4 aher men waiting for the next assault I am in the front lines of defense I am a scout I sit in a small trench waiting to see what they are sending out to attack us with we are eating sandwiches ,fruit and vegetables.
Hey Steffan,I Really like how you give the text feeling by using personal text,I think next time you should re-read and check you spelling.
ReplyDeleteHey Steffan,i really like the way you write as if you are involved or in the war.At least next time you could try and re-read and check your spelling but good job.
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